Cloud Fortress

Your steps are taking
away from here just like the 
arteries carry 

the blood away from 
the heart and now on you are 
going to be not 

miles but lives away 
from me; dimensions ahead
hidden in your cloud fortress.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Fleming Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 1:33 PM
Nice little poem...Enjoyed the read. :) john
Bosa Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 10:56 AM
Thank you! I am happy that you liked it. :-)))
Bocsa Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 1:31 PM
Flying the kite to conquer the clouds fortress. Delightful images...Best regards and wishes.
Bosa Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Thank you so much, Ovidiu! :-)))
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