P.S. Awtry Poet Rhyme

Cloud Feet

some days I walk on cloud feet
and everything is good
the sky is blue and fluffy too
and things go as they should

some days I walk on cloud feet
I bask in the sun’s warm rays
I wave hello to everyone
and generously sprinkle praise

some days I walk on cloud feet
but today’s not one of those days


1/6/2022

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Panagiota Romios May 19, 2023 at 9:29 AM I liked this! Glad you chose the last two lines… great Idea. Pangie

Deb M January 11, 2022 at 7:39 AM Hi P.S….this poem is so so sweet …I just love it! Cloud Feet is really cute! I hope today you are walking on cloud feet! Debx P.S. Awtry January 11, 2022 at 7:43 AM you know originally I had "and today is one of those days" as the last line. Far more jolly. At the last minute I thought I'd twist it--a bit grinchy, I know. I'm so glad you liked this one! I think it'll be a cloud feet sort of day ;) ~ps

Gershon Wolf January 8, 2022 at 7:36 PM hahahah! Clouds just don't let us walk on them as freely as they used to, I guess. Enjoyed this poem, P.S. Thanks, gw P.S. Awtry January 8, 2022 at 7:56 PM I'm glad you liked this one. I enjoyed writing it! yw :) ~ps

Vijay Pandit January 7, 2022 at 6:52 AM Some day are like that. Enjoyed the read, PS. P.S. Awtry January 7, 2022 at 7:20 AM Thank you Vijay! -ps

Mike Gentile January 7, 2022 at 5:44 AM A sleeping muse always awakens!! A beautiful poem this is!!! Happy Friday!! P.S. Awtry January 7, 2022 at 7:19 AM Thank you Mike :)

Anil Deo January 6, 2022 at 11:56 PM But the other poem HAS LIFE, TRUTH ABOVE & BELOW THE CLOUDS ... and even now ... We have Life, Thoughts, & Words. Your Word becomes living (enfleshed) with experience. Know u have purpose! P.S. Awtry January 7, 2022 at 7:18 AM Thank you Anil :) -ps

Connie Marcum Wong January 6, 2022 at 10:22 PM When the first line comes, the rest usually follow quickly. If you don’t have a pen and paper it escapes. I enjoyed and can relate P.S. new year blessings xxoo P.S. Awtry January 6, 2022 at 10:28 PM You are right! I’ve started using the “notes” feature on my phone. That helps. I am glad you liked this one! :) -ps

Charles Messina January 6, 2022 at 7:07 PM Sorry you had one of those days, P.S. A new sun will rise in the morn :) I hope the warmth will brighten your day. Blessings P.S. Awtry January 6, 2022 at 7:12 PM Thank you Charlie. I'll take the blessings, though undeserved. I just wrote the poem because that first sentence came to me :)