Cloud Feet

some days I walk on cloud feet
and everything is good
the sky is blue and fluffy too
and things go as they should

some days I walk on cloud feet
I bask in the sun’s warm rays
I wave hello to everyone
and generously sprinkle praise

some days I walk on cloud feet
but today’s not one of those days


1/6/2022

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/19/2023 9:29:00 AM

I liked this! Glad you chose the last two lines… great Idea. Pangie

Deb M

Date: 1/11/2022 7:39:00 AM

Hi P.S….this poem is so so sweet …I just love it! Cloud Feet is really cute! I hope today you are walking on cloud feet! Debx

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/11/2022 7:43:00 AM

you know originally I had "and today is one of those days" as the last line. Far more jolly. At the last minute I thought I'd twist it--a bit grinchy, I know. I'm so glad you liked this one! I think it'll be a cloud feet sort of day ;) ~ps

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/8/2022 7:36:00 PM

hahahah! Clouds just don't let us walk on them as freely as they used to, I guess. Enjoyed this poem, P.S. Thanks, gw

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/8/2022 7:56:00 PM

I'm glad you liked this one. I enjoyed writing it! yw :) ~ps

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/7/2022 6:52:00 AM

Some day are like that. Enjoyed the read, PS.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/7/2022 7:20:00 AM

Thank you Vijay! -ps

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/7/2022 5:44:00 AM

A sleeping muse always awakens!! A beautiful poem this is!!! Happy Friday!!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/7/2022 7:19:00 AM

Thank you Mike :)

Anil Deo

Date: 1/6/2022 11:56:00 PM

But the other poem HAS LIFE, TRUTH ABOVE & BELOW THE CLOUDS ... and even now ... We have Life, Thoughts, & Words. Your Word becomes living (enfleshed) with experience. Know u have purpose!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/7/2022 7:18:00 AM

Thank you Anil :) -ps

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/6/2022 10:22:00 PM

When the first line comes, the rest usually follow quickly. If you don’t have a pen and paper it escapes. I enjoyed and can relate P.S. new year blessings xxoo

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/6/2022 10:28:00 PM

You are right! I’ve started using the “notes” feature on my phone. That helps. I am glad you liked this one! :) -ps