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---Cloud Covered Lake

cloud covered lake
suspend the sky on water--
geese honk

naturehaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

December 7, 2012 at 3:29 PM

okay... back to the haiku... good one... love the image...pd

Jack Horne

November 11, 2011 at 2:05 PM

Thanks for your haiku advice, Debs. I do appreciate it : ) Thought I'd read some of yours - it may rub off on me. I love this one

Gwendolen Song

June 6, 2011 at 5:04 PM

Okay, Deb...God bless you for sharing this...sumo is definately not qualifying as a haiku..I will retract my entry for sure..I knew the nature component was necessary...as well as the season....u make a fine point. U can be my official PS teacher for now. So appreciate U. So in this haiku of yours, I see it's full of nature--the "jump" and the you choose to NOT put a season in it. Thank u, darlin. Gwendolen

Cory Long

May 31, 2011 at 5:01 PM

I have enjoyed your write today.. cory

Heidie Buys

May 17, 2011 at 6:58 AM

I have always admired the poets who can say so much with so few words. You paint an exquisite picture. Most enjoyable to read. xoxo

James Fraser

May 15, 2011 at 4:17 AM

Invisible sounds on the water, just like hearing the noises in the woods. It leaves the imagination to picture. Lovely Haiku Debbie....:)

Poet Destroyer A

May 13, 2011 at 1:23 PM

a cute haiku Debbie, enjoyed... take care,..p.f.

Jack Horne

May 13, 2011 at 12:02 PM

I love this one - I feel I can almost see and hear it : )

Sara Kendrick

May 13, 2011 at 10:23 AM

Beautiful scene..Enjoyed reading tis afternoon..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 13, 2011 at 5:22 AM

great imagery exudes in this one Debbie.. see the mojo returned luv.. with beautiful words like this is was not far away... chase those blues out the door...poetry forevermore..oh..