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The early evening sky billowed with smoke colored clouds, smoldering above the burnt sugar brown remnants of the October forest. Ashen rain fell upon the dirty sheets of tar. Spruce and pine protrude warily into the foreboding firmament piercing the night.

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Date: 11/4/2009 4:30:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Deborah. Bring us some more. Wishing you a week filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/3/2009 9:07:00 AM
I do love the way you have with descriptions....original and quite imaginative! Lovely work. ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/3/2009 8:35:00 AM
Great verbalization of such a scene.
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Date: 11/3/2009 8:13:00 AM
Deborah, Your writing is awesome. Love to you. girlfriend. Dane Ann
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Date: 11/3/2009 7:16:00 AM
Very descriptive. Keep writing. Sara
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