Cloud Bursts

cloud bursts scrub birch 
                   raindrops wash ladybugs
	showers cleanse herbs~
spring cleaning

4-17-21
Contest: One Haiku
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
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Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 4:37 PM
so cool how you got 17 syllables divided up this way. Great ending on this one.
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 12:20 PM
- Lovely written, Sam :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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