Notes About The Poem
07/09/25
Premier VIII Contest
by Rob Carmack
CLOUD VS CROWD
Just attempting to compare CLOUD
having simili with word CROWD.
Words are changeable to view :
Replace L by R : U by W.
Both Cloud and Crowd appear in mass
Common factor ! Oblivious.
Cloud goes mostly loud with thunder.
Crowd is often loud, no wonder.
Cloud brings cloud on get together.
Crowd attracts more crowd to gather.
Platoon of clouds to shower rain
Crowd in mass with men and women.
Cloud-burst happens in heavy storm.
Rowdy crowd in chaotic form.
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