Poet Destroyer A Poet Dramatic Monologue

Cloud 5

Falling from cloud 10 (a self rejection collaboration) 

King Mandalay!

Poet Destroyer, I want to tell you this 
My heart is not ready to sing
I will always seal my love to you with a final kiss
So you can always feel you were once my everything 
 
I am sorry I was too much for you on your lonely night
My ego is too strong for you to be with someone like me 
Sorry, my heart beat will set you on cloud five away from the light 
It's not you my love I need more dots to see
 
PD, It is not easy to feel overzealous
I became paranoid with this system that  glistens
A friendship I destroyed by the thought that made me jealous
P.D., I don't think we could ever be friends I never did listens 

My ways ruined the perfect expression of a perfect emotion 
Once again what could have been a nurtured affection I ended
You will never again see the moon to my ocean
I will leave you now on cloud 5 hoping you don't feel offended
 
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Poet Destroyer
 
King Mandalay, you’re my love and will always be my desire 
With an endless world of possibilities you will forever own my heart 
My heart for you will always burn with an eternal fire
I place my hand on my broken heart to another lonely street
 
Never will my heart beat feel complete
You were such a gift I did not want to live without 
Without you I will go back to my cloud 5 the abyss of delete
I gave you my heart to the fullest, now why so much doubt? 
 
King Mandalay, you spin my head round and round
Like a kaleidoscope ever color will crash above
You dropped my heart from cloud 10 right into the  ground
Our friendship connected our fate into a promise of broken love
 
The gravity between me and you was really true in my heart 
My lost emotions will break my unity to survive
You are the devil who ripped out my best body part
My energy will dive back into cloud 5 where life in no longer alive


             CLOUD 5
       COLLABORATION

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Freddie Robinson Jr. November 29, 2016 at 4:48 AM Cool poem about a failed relationship. The twin binoculars of two poetic voices gives a better clarity than one set of eyes can. Drop the mic, double delight poem, PD and King Mandalay. Much love to ya both.

Paul Callus January 29, 2016 at 3:06 PM This was quite a creative idea to do a double take, Linda! No relationship is free of bumps and hiccups, otherwise it would simply peter out! I wonder what it's like on cloud 5!:) Hugs // paul

John Posey September 17, 2014 at 10:04 PM Well, I want you to know that being with you on cloud 5 could well equal the feeling I would have on cloud 9..... my respects to King, of course..... Congrats on your win... Jake

Len Gasun September 15, 2014 at 11:28 AM Good a.m. my loving sis! This is another truly amazing masterpiece! Another great poem deep from the heart of a very awesome and great poet. I'm glad I've found it in winner's list in one of d recent contests. I know there are still priceless gems of yours that i've missed. CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved top win! Biggest hugs & cheers! By d way, hope everythin is doin well with u. Tyssm for the sweet reply d other day. Sending u many hugs! lovem4evrLeo

Mark Trichet September 13, 2014 at 5:37 PM Linda this is stunning, simply stunning. Congrats on a masterful write

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 12, 2014 at 9:14 PM Splendid write PD n a super win! Big congrats!

Bl Devnath September 12, 2014 at 2:56 PM Congrats on your superb win, my *friend. Loved always,bl

Honestly J.T. September 12, 2014 at 1:56 PM Congratulations on your win in Regina's contest. -JT

Pandita Sietesantos September 12, 2014 at 12:04 PM Hi PD, congratulations on your great win! Excellent write! Well-deserved! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A September 12, 2014 at 10:48 AM Thank you Regina, for the lovely win... YEAH.... Congrats to me... :) PD

Carrie Richards September 12, 2014 at 9:57 AM One doesn't think of internal rejection....but in your unique twist, and style, you nailed it ! Congrats on your win, PD !!

Dr.Ram Mehta September 12, 2014 at 9:46 AM Nice collaboration Linda. Congrats on the win,

Brenda Meier-Hans September 12, 2014 at 6:16 AM Congratulations on this wonderfully written poem and top spot win.

Regina Mcintosh September 11, 2014 at 10:54 PM Congratulations on your win... I love it and you, Love and prayers and thanks for entering the contest, Gina

Andrea Dietrich April 3, 2014 at 9:25 PM regarding your remark on my rhyme battle win. Yep, Finally I made it on one of her lists (after trying four times) and got a big HM. I am overjoyed. hahaha. Luv ya!!

Shayla Dendinger April 25, 2012 at 8:40 AM Congrats on your win xD :)

Olusegun Arowolo April 6, 2012 at 5:59 PM Awesome and wonderful piece,PD.Congrats on your well deserved win.....I love this Piece lady...Hmm really dramatic....

Andrea Dietrich April 4, 2012 at 11:40 PM I sure remember this one, Irma. Congratulations on a well deserved win.

Fabiyas M V April 4, 2012 at 8:12 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win!

Black Eyed Susan April 4, 2012 at 7:09 AM congrats on your win :)

Carol Sunshine Brown April 3, 2012 at 11:25 AM Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest Dear P.D. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A April 3, 2012 at 9:15 AM everyone re-reading this... i want you toooo know, I created both sides of the collaborations... this was one of them sad times... me and Nathan, got mad for the first time.. so i went and destroyer our cloud 10 poem... King Mandalay, is a make believe person... always..pd

Ralph Taylor April 3, 2012 at 9:09 AM Congrats on your well deserved win, P.D. Outstanding piece. Enjoyed. Nice going, my friend. luv and huggs, Ralphie

Nathan D. April 3, 2012 at 8:23 AM congrats, ;-) how can I forget how mad you went, and destroyer our Cloud 10 xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxo Nate

Andrea Dietrich October 21, 2011 at 11:22 AM Here is one from happier times? Irma, what is this I just read you over at cory's poem talking about wanting to die or something? Gosh, you must really be bummed lately! well, I hope things turn around for you. I better get off here finally. LUv, Andrea

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