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Closure

Where once I could only taste Sweet as sweetness should be, Now there is only but A sense of hostility Towards me. Perhaps you should but could not; I say, “please, ” but you would not Say goodbye. Now you say it is not over And that I should wait; So I do so, But is it in vain? Like in slow motion, Falling in mid-air, Faster and faster; Till the ground meets me And my body shatters and breaks. It’s been so long since I last saw you, My heart is now cramping in ache; But the ground has not yet met me, So as you say so, Here I lie and wait. I miss you, And shall keep missing you, Till the time comes When I will miss Missing you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/6/2012 3:21:00 AM
aw i love it, it is sad when that happens in life, and i know that feeling right now, where u liek soem one and they say they ahve to wait, I beenw aiitng 18 months LOL, for this person i speak of, and i just handed it all over to God because sometimes life is cruel and i knoww aitring makes uss tronger and makes us rely on God a lot more but it does not make the heart hurt any less, it feels liek a life time this i know, yep we can only take so much before we say forget it or give up alltogether. God bless you take care from diane
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Robert Uy
Date: 6/7/2012 5:41:00 PM
It's feels nice to be able to write something that touches the heart, something somebody else could relate to...glad you loved it. Thanks!

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