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Closer We Get, the Farther We Look Back

Closer We Get, The Farther We Look Back Sad dying embers of yesterday's feast interest and feed me not in the least For the hearty joys that future shall give heartens me to strive forever to live Great memories of my family's past flow blessedly with me until the last Into the dark void my soul may soon fly my past good and bad I will not deny Returning often in my long night dreams she of ravishing beauty, skin of creams Memories of loves that took a wrong turn yet with it all, my restless mind still yearns Closer we get, the farther we look back cherish our memories we stay on track Robert Lindley REVISED.. Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: Total # Words: 106

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Date: 5/30/2016 11:33:00 AM
Great write, beautiful lines. A well deserved 7
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Date: 5/28/2016 4:46:00 PM
True enough! It seems often I'd like to visit my past and visit common and special days. A happy memory with Mom were we had lunch in Santa Cruz, a week at grandmother's place in summer, and always, always, a day with my husband, where I could put my arms around him, hold him, and not say a word. He would know!
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Date: 5/25/2016 12:13:00 PM
having just posted a crown of sonnets i thought I better read this and I love it, well done xx
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Date: 5/25/2016 10:55:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 5/25/2016 10:24:00 AM
I am totally in awe of this one,Sir Robert.stellar write.
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