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Closer To Heaven

Before I'll be going to sleep without hearing the seagulls shriek, let me pray and be truly meek: asking my Lord not to be weak... trusting the calmness of the deep. And should I stray like a lost sheep, I will not fear the waves beneath; closer to Heaven, where stars peak, this captain won't abandon his fleet... should danger foretell a defeat! Written by Andrew Crisci for Giorgio Veneto's contest, " Metrical Verse " Monorhyme

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/24/2013 4:15:00 PM
Perfection indeed…Sara
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Date: 9/22/2013 8:02:00 PM
Andrew, nice Metrical verse win... luv~Linda.
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Date: 9/22/2013 5:46:00 AM
lovely, inspirational poem...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/21/2013 12:10:00 AM
Congrats on winning the place in the contest, Andrew
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Date: 1/18/2011 5:40:00 AM
Lovely words in your write Andrew my friend.. a passionate piece on your faith and very inspirational to all readers.. with luv..
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Date: 1/18/2011 2:45:00 AM
oh my! how uplifting and refreshing this profound piece is.. faith rings eternal, andrew! best winning wishes to you! :) nette
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