Closer Than a Kiss

How can we get closer than a sweet kiss?
Two lovers drift in the arms of first sin 
There is the sharing of lovers own skin
Closer than a kiss, where it did begin
That’s how we get closer sharing a kiss

© 3/01/2013 

Contest Entry Envelop Quintet.
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Fraser Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 1:40 PM
The sharing of a kiss in various circumstances, but it's the sharing of that kiss that leaves to loving trances. Nice one Mandy, love the title if I may say so. Most deserved of it's win :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 1:37 AM
thanks James xx
Goodwin Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 9:37 AM
Very nicely written! Enjoyed the read. Many congrats. Thanks for commenting on mine. -- Sean
Ober Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 9:13 AM
Congrats on an awesome win and a wonderful write!
May Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 7:40 PM
congrats on a fine win Mandy
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 7:14 PM
congrats, mandy. Finally I can come here and say that. This was very cute.
Guzzi Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 6:36 PM
Congrad's to a rising star of Poetry Soup. Lovely to share the spot with you. Light & Love
Horsman Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 2:13 PM
nice one, good luck in the contest..
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January 3, 2013 at 12:17 PM
Sounds like fun!
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