Closer

A forbidden love a forbidden hate 
I taste your lust , that is my fate .
I feel you warm , laying next to me .
    I feel the heat that should never be .
I;ll twist your body ,you are my dreams .
   I;ll pull you closer, so I can hear your screams .
It is my sickness ,your deep desire .
  As we melt togather ,
consumed by hell fire .
           

                                James,.................................
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 1:43 PM
Nice beginning half the battle won, I like the first two lines to express your thoughts, james
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October 1, 2010 at 11:27 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration James. Love, Carol
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October 1, 2010 at 10:55 AM
Deep write my friend...
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