Closeness Distress Bt

Closeness invades
freedomless mind,
ego in mess.

In twined shadows
undefined self,
sense fails to find.

December 9, 2020 
Contest : Bauk Than, Than Bauk
Sponsor : Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 5:11 AM
Wonderful! Congratulations, Subimal!
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February 15, 2021 at 9:51 PM
Nicely done, Subimal. Congrats on your win!
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