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Closeness

Closeness a ripple of chance in an ever changing pulse ~tides shift~ seasons shed her shape warm caresses disperse poetic forbearance rests outside the dearth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/10/2018 3:20:00 PM
So very beautiful!
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Date: 1/9/2018 2:20:00 PM
A lovely piece Tim, the desire to move on to another pace is in the air. I do love the poetic feel and changing warmance... it's in every tone. I wish i could rate this poem, I'd give it a high 7. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Linda
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Date: 1/9/2018 12:28:00 PM
I love how this flows just like a ripple in a lake, i love the imagery here. Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 1/9/2018 5:02:00 AM
I like the shape itself as well Tim, beautiful
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Date: 1/8/2018 7:33:00 PM
Love the wording, beautiful poetry!
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Date: 1/8/2018 2:47:00 PM
Airy and delicate as lace :)
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Date: 1/8/2018 2:07:00 PM
"Seasons shed her shape"? Last season added to mine!!
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Date: 1/8/2018 1:33:00 PM
ohh, what an atmospheric piece, tim... you flow!... huggs
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