Closeness

Closeness a ripple of chance in an ever changing pulse ~tides shift~ seasons shed her shape warm caresses disperse poetic forbearance rests outside the dearth
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Hopper Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 3:20 PM
So very beautiful!
A   Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 2:20 PM
A lovely piece Tim, the desire to move on to another pace is in the air. I do love the poetic feel and changing warmance... it's in every tone. I wish i could rate this poem, I'd give it a high 7. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Linda
Michelle Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 12:28 PM
I love how this flows just like a ripple in a lake, i love the imagery here. Love, Juli-Michelle
White Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 5:02 AM
I like the shape itself as well Tim, beautiful
Vaso Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 7:33 PM
Love the wording, beautiful poetry!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 2:47 PM
Airy and delicate as lace :)
Murray Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 2:07 PM
"Seasons shed her shape"? Last season added to mine!!
Onclaud Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 1:33 PM
ohh, what an atmospheric piece, tim... you flow!... huggs
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