Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Senryu

Closeness

Compressive closeness 
Enchanted vision crumpled
In collapsed distance.

Transparent closeness
Masked reality unveiled
In snapped relation. 

Demanding closeness
Stifled freedom fragmented
In ego crisis.

Transgressive closeness
Nascent emotions smothered
In timed attraction.

Unscripted closeness
Unfinished story shelved
In dark memory.

December 10, 2017.

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Geoffrey Brewer December 13, 2017 at 4:27 AM An interesting poem of variations on the theme of closeness. Well done! You might like to compare it with my poem - The Spaces Between Subimal Sinha-Roy December 14, 2017 at 6:33 AM Thank you, Geoffrey for your appreciation. Your poem on space is wonderful. You may see my comments. Subimal Sinha-Roy December 14, 2017 at 6:33 AM Thank you, Geoffrey for your appreciation. Your poem on space is wonderful. You may see my comments.