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Closeness

Compressive closeness Enchanted vision crumpled In collapsed distance. Transparent closeness Masked reality unveiled In snapped relation. Demanding closeness Stifled freedom fragmented In ego crisis. Transgressive closeness Nascent emotions smothered In timed attraction. Unscripted closeness Unfinished story shelved In dark memory. December 10, 2017.

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Date: 12/13/2017 4:27:00 AM
An interesting poem of variations on the theme of closeness. Well done! You might like to compare it with my poem - The Spaces Between
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/14/2017 6:33:00 AM
Thank you, Geoffrey for your appreciation. Your poem on space is wonderful. You may see my comments.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/14/2017 6:33:00 AM
Thank you, Geoffrey for your appreciation. Your poem on space is wonderful. You may see my comments.

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