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Am I right? I think all kisses are silent, both lips are so closed up.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2025 12:02:00 PM

Great succinctness!! Open mouthed kisses may be not quite as silent? I really like this one

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 8/20/2025 1:12:00 PM

Thank you :-)

Rowena Velasco

Date: 8/20/2025 10:54:00 AM

it’s clever and concise! It reads like a witty micro-poem or epigram, easy to remember and share.

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 8/20/2025 1:11:00 PM

Thank you :-)

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/20/2025 2:53:00 AM

In stillness, let their lips meet, where words fall away like autumn leaves. Wise analysis

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 8/20/2025 5:28:00 AM

Thank you! Big smiles! Have a nice day ~ AA

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/20/2025 2:11:00 AM

When lips open, love shines, when lips closed, you know Zionists are committing crimes! LOL sorry I could not resist, in my current mood forgive me.

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 8/20/2025 5:29:00 AM

Your word reminded me with the saying "No more taxes read my lips" LOL

CayCay Jennings

Date: 8/19/2025 4:46:00 PM

This has given me great pause. Seriously, I've been contemplating the issue for a good 2 minutes. OK, I'm decided, from son I often get loud smackers, from my love and pasts loves, yes, silent and hopefully not too wet! Good one, made me think. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 8/20/2025 5:31:00 AM

Big smile! Have a wonderful day ~ AA