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Close Your Eyes

Close your eyes and think of us as we journey across the sea take my hand and waltz with me in the shadow of the moon Close your eyes and think of us listen to our hearts take a chance and stay with me in the comfort of my arms Enter in my dreams tonight we'll spread our wings and soar float amongst the clouds with me at the foot of heaven's door Be the sun that wakes me up the breeze that keeps me cool be the rain that keeps me fresh the one I can talk to Close your eyes and think of us when something's right you know come and be my partner the one I won't let go

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/16/2015 12:05:00 AM

Simply romantic, :)

Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2015 8:59:00 AM

Thanks Arthur....sorry you guys didn't make it..we start today

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/15/2015 2:37:00 PM

Hello Tim My Friend!! A beautiful free verse write here. It flows so well, and the reader can both see and feel the imagery as if unfolds from verse to verse. Excellent Work and Very Romantic!! A "7" + FAV!! Cheers, Gary

Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2015 8:58:00 AM

Thanks Gary....I need to stop by your writes later...I'm way behind....Tim

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 5/15/2015 6:52:00 AM

beautifully painted piece tim wishing you a lovely weekend pal

Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2015 8:46:00 AM

Thank you liam

Peter Dome

Date: 5/15/2015 4:14:00 AM

This is just so wonderful and very romantic like it a lot. well done. best wishes. Pete.

Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2015 8:45:00 AM

Thank you Pete...I'll have to stop by your page later. Been busy chasing the kids around

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/15/2015 12:24:00 AM

Tim, this is so romantic! A delightful write. Love, Kim

Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2015 8:44:00 AM

Thanks Kim have a blessed Sunday

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/15/2015 12:01:00 AM

I so love the title..Its almost as if one is invited to close the eyes to wake up in another world and live the dream.Wonderful Tim..Like the image too. a favourite.

Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2015 8:43:00 AM

Thanks Charmaine.... It would be a dream to close your eyes and transpose yourself into the one you love's arms..thanks for all your support on my simple lines....hugs Tim