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Close Your Eyes

Close your eyes and think of us

as we journey across the sea

take my hand and waltz with me

in the shadow of the moon


Close your eyes and think of us

listen to our hearts

take a chance and stay with me

in the comfort of my arms

  

Enter in my dreams tonight

we'll spread our wings and soar

float amongst the clouds with me

at the foot of heaven's door


Be the sun that wakes me up

the breeze that keeps me cool

be the rain that keeps me fresh

the one I can talk to


Close your eyes and think of us

when something's right you know

come and be my partner

the one I won't let  go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/16/2015 12:05:00 AM
Simply romantic, :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2015 8:59:00 AM
Thanks Arthur....sorry you guys didn't make it..we start today
Date: 5/15/2015 2:37:00 PM
Hello Tim My Friend!! A beautiful free verse write here. It flows so well, and the reader can both see and feel the imagery as if unfolds from verse to verse. Excellent Work and Very Romantic!! A "7" + FAV!! Cheers, Gary
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2015 8:58:00 AM
Thanks Gary....I need to stop by your writes later...I'm way behind....Tim
Date: 5/15/2015 6:52:00 AM
beautifully painted piece tim wishing you a lovely weekend pal
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2015 8:46:00 AM
Thank you liam
Date: 5/15/2015 4:14:00 AM
This is just so wonderful and very romantic like it a lot. well done. best wishes. Pete.
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2015 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Pete...I'll have to stop by your page later. Been busy chasing the kids around
Date: 5/15/2015 12:24:00 AM
Tim, this is so romantic! A delightful write. Love, Kim
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2015 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Kim have a blessed Sunday
Date: 5/15/2015 12:01:00 AM
I so love the title..Its almost as if one is invited to close the eyes to wake up in another world and live the dream.Wonderful Tim..Like the image too. a favourite.
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/17/2015 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Charmaine.... It would be a dream to close your eyes and transpose yourself into the one you love's arms..thanks for all your support on my simple lines....hugs Tim