Close Your Eyes

Close your eyes and think of us

as we journey across the sea

take my hand and waltz with me

in the shadow of the moon


Close your eyes and think of us

listen to our hearts

take a chance and stay with me

in the comfort of my arms

  

Enter in my dreams tonight

we'll spread our wings and soar

float amongst the clouds with me

at the foot of heaven's door


Be the sun that wakes me up

the breeze that keeps me cool

be the rain that keeps me fresh

the one I can talk to


Close your eyes and think of us

when something's right you know

come and be my partner

the one I won't let  go
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Vaso Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 12:05 AM
Simply romantic, :)
Smith Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Thanks Arthur....sorry you guys didn't make it..we start today
Bateman Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 2:37 PM
Hello Tim My Friend!! A beautiful free verse write here. It flows so well, and the reader can both see and feel the imagery as if unfolds from verse to verse. Excellent Work and Very Romantic!! A "7" + FAV!! Cheers, Gary
Smith Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 8:58 AM
Thanks Gary....I need to stop by your writes later...I'm way behind....Tim
Mcdaid Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 6:52 AM
beautifully painted piece tim wishing you a lovely weekend pal
Smith Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 8:46 AM
Thank you liam
Dome Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 4:14 AM
This is just so wonderful and very romantic like it a lot. well done. best wishes. Pete.
Smith Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 8:45 AM
Thank you Pete...I'll have to stop by your page later. Been busy chasing the kids around
Merryman Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 12:24 AM
Tim, this is so romantic! A delightful write. Love, Kim
Smith Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 8:44 AM
Thanks Kim have a blessed Sunday
Chircop Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 12:01 AM
I so love the title..Its almost as if one is invited to close the eyes to wake up in another world and live the dream.Wonderful Tim..Like the image too. a favourite.
Smith Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 8:43 AM
Thanks Charmaine.... It would be a dream to close your eyes and transpose yourself into the one you love's arms..thanks for all your support on my simple lines....hugs Tim
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