Michael J. Falotico Poet Ode

Close To You

A daydream that lasts awhile..
Reality that seems a mile..
Tree tops that move with ease..
A smile faded with a breeze..
Miracles you see in movies..
A fairy tale so far from me..
So many doors that close so fast..
When will I know if this love will last..
Long walks that clear my head...
A memory of things we said...
Walking a tightrope of pain and sorrow..
Where just a stone's throw from that glow...

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Dinda Minardi June 26, 2011 at 8:45 AM Now I remember why I favorite you in a first place. Cos I love how you write you poem, simple, interesting, sometimes dark, sometimes angelic... :)

Wilma Neels February 15, 2011 at 3:36 AM Your mindset at the time while writing this one is quite clear MJF.. I miss those days when my poetry had that raw emotion. The fear of opening myself up in my poetry I keep to myself, got a whole file called poems not posted lol :) love Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown November 15, 2010 at 11:18 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Michael. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 14, 2010 at 2:00 PM Congrats my W.K. on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all my dear friend .. with luv always your Jersey Girl..

Joanna Smith February 18, 2010 at 10:55 AM wow now this one i liked alot!it was great and i loved the begining and the part about miracles you see in movies this was a very sweet and every couple has memories of pain and sorrow but it can be worked through=)Jo