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Close To Perfection

Life is a storm and I search to hide Found a place deep down inside His heart,big enough for the world His smile cannot be put into words The light his eyes give make me weak With his arms around me I cannot speak I can melt just by the sound of his voice My heart skips a beat without a choice The smell of him by me won't go away God sent me a sign of why I should stay I stand on an edge now fearful to fall Please pull me up before I lose it all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/30/2010 5:57:00 PM
Rabab..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:44:00 AM
Nice rhyming poem with good images, rabab
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:09:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Rabab. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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