Close To Perfection

Life is a storm and I search to hide
Found a place deep down inside
His heart,big enough for the world
His smile cannot be put into words
The light his eyes give make me weak
With his arms around me I cannot speak
I can melt just by the sound of his voice
My heart skips a beat without a choice
The smell of him by me won't go away
God sent me a sign of why I should stay
I stand on an edge now fearful to fall
Please pull me up before I lose it all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 30, 2010 at 5:57 PM
Rabab..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.
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December 30, 2010 at 5:44 AM
Nice rhyming poem with good images, rabab
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December 30, 2010 at 5:09 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Rabab. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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