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Close To My Heart

I'll keep you safe little girl, there's no need for that frown Let's wrap you up in my towel, and dry your hair, dripping down Come here, please don't cry, this is where you should be The waves are too high. Here, ... sit close to me.... You shiver and shake,....but let us soak in the sun Some castles we'll make, while the warmth holds your hand Let's lie down in the sand, make an angel, with wings Spread our arms, opened wide, and we'll hear lullabies Let's get warm for awhile and put tears far away Exchange them for smiles, until the end of the day The moon is a pearl, for the sun must depart Curl into my arms, and just stay close to my heart When it's time to go home, and the stars say goodnight I will tuck you in bed, and kiss your sweet head When the new morning comes, we will come to the shore And Mr. Sun will shine down, on the child he adores
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Johnson Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 4:59 PM
congratulations on another great win. Love, Joyce
Onclaud Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 11:19 AM
a loving display of maternal love, carrie, so well- expressed!..big cheers to you for a splendid win!.. huggs
Mehta Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 10:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Wonderful thoughts to heal a heart, carrie
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March 11, 2014 at 10:00 AM
Congrats on your deserved win Carrie!!
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 9:05 AM
- Theme - "TO HEAL A HEART" contest: Congratulations on your touching and excellent winning poem, Carrie ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Long Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 7:57 AM
congrats on your poem being featured love cory
Brown Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 6:36 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Carrie. It is an honor to be on the list with you this week. May you find the inspiration to keep you writing. Love, Carol
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June 9, 2011 at 9:53 AM
Congrats Carrie on "Keep Safe" being featured. Always a pleasure reading your work. Vince
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June 7, 2011 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations Carrie, on being featured this week with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
Mehta Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 8:08 AM
Enjoyed your poem being featured this week, Carrie
Austin Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 11:41 AM
A beautiful sand castle. Congrats on the selection. LOve, Dave
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June 5, 2011 at 5:47 PM
Congrats Carrie on your featured poem this week on PS.. a great piece to share with us all my friend with luv..
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July 22, 2008 at 8:01 PM
I've read some of your poetry. When I imagine the characters, I tend to imagine God and me. Or God and some other person. Anyway, God with one of us. Talking to us. I love to read this because it just points out the different qualities that He has. Great stuff, Carrie.
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July 15, 2008 at 9:05 PM
Carrie, I love the message this wonderful piece contains and want you to know that you have a heart of Gold... MPK
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