Close To End

I am close to end. I am as a falling star Bright, close to its end

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/19/2024 12:23:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 12/7/2017 12:28:00 AM

Noh u r a bright poetic star that needs to keep glowing without falling. This was a creative fabulous haiku!! Kudos.

Mario De Paz
Date: 12/7/2017 8:58:00 AM

Thank you for coming and commenting

Leon Enriquez

Date: 11/14/2017 9:52:00 AM

Dear Mario: Hope you are OK. All the best then, Leon.

Mario De Paz
Date: 11/14/2017 10:11:00 AM

yes, Leon, I am well, although close to end. Thanks for coming