Close To End

I am close to end.
I am as a falling star
Bright, close to its end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 12:23 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 12:28 AM
Noh u r a bright poetic star that needs to keep glowing without falling. This was a creative fabulous haiku!! Kudos.
De Paz Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Thank you for coming and commenting
Enriquez Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 9:52 AM
Dear Mario: Hope you are OK. All the best then, Leon.
De Paz Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 10:11 AM
yes, Leon, I am well, although close to end. Thanks for coming
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