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it surely would dear poet, the heart owns its own poetry and love, thank you for sharing these amazing words today, have a blessed one Kelli :)

What an evocative and soulful write this is, i love the descriptive nature of your thoughts, expressed in such eloquence. Especially the opening lines. Drew me right in. I loved “ Your name upon the wind Would time reverse And my love rise again?“ soul touching and so poignant. Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light

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Dear Kelli, The imagery of the foggy air and rising sun evokes a sense of searching and desiring. The contrast between the present and the past - between the "celestial treasure" and "rose petals and hyacinths" - beautifully highlights the feelings of loss and reminiscence. The ending question, "Would time reverse and my love rise again?", carries a strong emotional weight, leaving a lasting impression on me the reader. Such a heartfelt piece. - Blessings, Daniel