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Through the cloudy foggy
Air I searched for you
Waiting for the sun to
Rise and dry the morning dew
A celestial treasure 
Your love has given me
Rose petals and Hyacinths 
Each and every heartbeat 
If I could but whisper 
Your name upon the wind 
Would time reverse 
And my love rise again?

Copyright © Kelli White | Year Posted 2024

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Mystic Rose Rose Date: 2/27/2024 6:16:00 AM it surely would dear poet, the heart owns its own poetry and love, thank you for sharing these amazing words today, have a blessed one Kelli :) Login to Reply Kelli White Date: 2/27/2024 9:27:00 AM Thank you so much MR, god bless you as well,kelli

Ink Empress Date: 2/26/2024 9:17:00 AM What an evocative and soulful write this is, i love the descriptive nature of your thoughts, expressed in such eloquence. Especially the opening lines. Drew me right in. I loved “ Your name upon the wind Would time reverse And my love rise again?“ soul touching and so poignant. Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light Login to Reply Kelli White Date: 2/26/2024 4:42:00 PM Thank you very much, Ink, kelli

Marugu Mo Date: 2/26/2024 7:55:00 AM If only whispers would...love it Login to Reply Kelli White Date: 2/26/2024 4:43:00 PM Hello Mr Mo , thank you for stopping by, hope you are well, kelli

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 2/25/2024 4:11:00 PM Dear Kelli, The imagery of the foggy air and rising sun evokes a sense of searching and desiring. The contrast between the present and the past - between the "celestial treasure" and "rose petals and hyacinths" - beautifully highlights the feelings of loss and reminiscence. The ending question, "Would time reverse and my love rise again?", carries a strong emotional weight, leaving a lasting impression on me the reader. Such a heartfelt piece. - Blessings, Daniel Login to Reply Kelli White Date: 2/26/2024 6:39:00 AM Thank you very much Daniel, you are very kind, kelli