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Clockwork Cat

Clockwork Cat Pats my sleepy cheek. Hits my eyelids, boops my nose. Yelling please get up! -by Edlynn Nau ©April 13, 2019

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/24/2019 5:50:00 AM

This sweet haiku really made me miss our cat. He was special and I could easily relate his actions script to your wonderful poem Edlynn. Loved it! : ) xxoo

Edlynn Nau
Date: 6/26/2019 10:14:00 AM

Awww! I’m sorry your dear cat is gone. They leave such a hole for a long time. This is Charley who wakes me every morning with his pats and his watchful bright blue eyes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2019 7:47:00 PM

I had a cat like this, so of course, I love this one

Edlynn Nau
Date: 4/17/2019 9:34:00 PM

Fur alarms are THE BEST and most reliable. I have two sweet fur babies.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/15/2019 12:35:00 PM

Hems that's how our beateous cats are!..well done.. Panagiota

Edlynn Nau
Date: 4/15/2019 11:18:00 PM

Thank you! I love these furry alarm clocks. Much better than the manmade kind. I see two blue eyes as wonderful as the sky each morning once Charley can get me to open mine. He always wakes me at the same exact time every day. How does he know?

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/14/2019 5:51:00 PM

very nice haiku

Edlynn Nau
Date: 4/14/2019 6:29:00 PM

Thank you! I wasn’t sure if this might be the Senryu genre instead!