Clocks Stop

When I'm away from you, time start to freeze,
I get all cold inside, as if my heart is zero degrees,
I can not concentrate, all i can hear is tick, tock,
Everything gets motionless, even the hands upon the clock,
I try to walk around, but it's like zero gravity,
My soul start to hurt, like i got 10,000 cavities,
I start to lose my mind, like its serious insanity,
All i care about is you, to hell with all of the humanity,
You make my heart fly, lift me miles above the ground,
And you make it shine brighter than the stars that i surround,
Up, Up, Up, you make my head reach the sky's ceiling,
The clocks might stop, but nothing can't stop how I'm feeling.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Al-Riyami Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 4:18 AM
Your Descriptive talent Blows My heart XD
Loveless Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 4:07 AM
Awww. I Love This. Nice Work.
Anish Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 4:54 PM
Nice "rap" stye poem. Do you go to readings? This one would be good to hear aloud. Yours Matthew Anish
Goodwin Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 4:21 PM
AWWWWWWWWWW THAT'S SO SWEET. I LIKE THIS POEM. I'm new to the poetry soup world so if you can please read some of my work and tell me what you think. Please and thank you
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