Clocks

Counting silver seconds
Loosing teal time
Onyx owl beckons 
Clock call is a chime
Karma at it’s prime
Saint or sinner shines

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/17/2024 2:01:00 PM

You tackled this acrostic with a lovely creative touch, Karen. Personally I have given up counting seconds...I'd rather keep myself fully occupied and pretend that time does not count :) Regards // paul

Karen Jones
Date: 9/17/2024 2:10:00 PM

What a zest for life you have Paul!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/13/2024 2:37:00 AM

Lovely acrostic. I wonder why I never tried one. You did well.

Karen Jones
Date: 9/13/2024 5:17:00 AM

Thanks Victor! You’d master the form if you wanted to try! Friday blessings!