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Clock Ninette

clock reminds hurry up she's insistent tick-a-tock-a-tick encourager a constant pushy clock

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/2/2018 8:19:00 PM
You know, now that you mention it; they really are. Well done.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2018 10:01:00 PM
I hear the tick and it makes me rather mean and mad actually, but I have DOG ears.
Date: 11/30/2018 6:29:00 PM
That's why I don't like clocks.... they're too "pushy"! ;D Love it!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/30/2018 11:26:00 PM
I rarely look at them, carry no phone or watch.
Date: 11/30/2018 12:27:00 PM
I like the urgency you express here - great line 'pushy clock'!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/30/2018 3:14:00 PM
My ADHD self despises the tick of the smallest clock.
Date: 11/29/2018 10:55:00 PM
clock reminds all to leave the bogus cloak in time ! //// lovely Ninette
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/30/2018 7:02:00 AM
I sit and stare at it sometimes, wondering how she could have deceived me like that.

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