Caren Krutsinger Poet Ninette

Clock Ninette

clock
                                   reminds
                                   hurry up
                              she's insistent
                           tick-a-tock-a-tick
                               encourager
                               a constant
                                    pushy
                                     clock

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M. L. Kiser December 2, 2018 at 8:19 PM You know, now that you mention it; they really are. Well done. Caren Krutsinger December 2, 2018 at 10:01 PM I hear the tick and it makes me rather mean and mad actually, but I have DOG ears.

Rhona Mcferran November 30, 2018 at 6:29 PM That's why I don't like clocks.... they're too "pushy"! ;D Love it!! Caren Krutsinger November 30, 2018 at 11:26 PM I rarely look at them, carry no phone or watch.

Michelle Faulkner November 30, 2018 at 12:27 PM I like the urgency you express here - great line 'pushy clock'! Caren Krutsinger November 30, 2018 at 3:14 PM My ADHD self despises the tick of the smallest clock.

Mahtab Bangalee November 29, 2018 at 10:55 PM clock reminds all to leave the bogus cloak in time ! //// lovely Ninette Caren Krutsinger November 30, 2018 at 7:02 AM I sit and stare at it sometimes, wondering how she could have deceived me like that.