Clock Confiscates

Three hands of time roll,
pass one by one in circles
golden hours, silver minutes 
relentless seconds.
thoughts pulse to murky future 
lost in what's there left behind.

Mystical motion 
tonight transcends tomorrow.
Unending dark tunnels fill
pleasure and sorrow.
Spinning Earth revolving Sun
new Moon born, trapped in cycles.
 
Unanchored moments 
to hit buzzer, and win game.
Hurried life runs out of time
as clock confiscates.
A storm in which, all are lost
clouds emptied...and  stars faded 

Hold on Wanderer...
Let's have an easier life.
Let's fold time, tuck it away.
Big tiny moments...
Deepest blue and Highest high
Time will just stop, when you die.



13th July 2019
howmanysyllable counted 5 7 7 5 7 7 in all 4 stanza

Sponsor	Joseph May
Contest 	Fives and Sevens
Theme Pic No 4 : A Clock

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 7/30/2019 1:33:00 PM
Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..
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Date: 7/22/2019 9:13:00 AM
relentless seconds...hold on wanderer! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/22/2019 8:31:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS. Blessing
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Date: 7/22/2019 5:34:00 AM
- When time is over ... - Congratulations on your wonderful win, Debjani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/21/2019 8:11:00 PM
Congrats!! my friend on this great entry, Debjani...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/21/2019 4:57:00 PM
This is so true. Our concept of time only matters in our earthly life. "Big tiny moments..." I love this oxymoron! Congratulations on your wonderful podium win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 7/21/2019 2:49:00 PM
Golden hours of time keep rolling by..Congrats on your win Debjani..
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Date: 7/16/2019 11:50:00 PM
Penned on super excellence. This is the reason each day you are ranking higher. Congrats.
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 7/17/2019 8:40:00 PM
Thanks,.. Its your wishes that matters more, ranking is just a number
Date: 7/16/2019 11:03:00 PM
An exceptional piece. Good luck in the contest.
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 7/17/2019 8:41:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words... Your showers of praises on so many of my poems
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