Clock

Clock
                       watcher     
                      watches time
                      hours hours
                Needs to be done on time in order to be done
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Strand Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 12:40 AM
The Ray Stebbings ideal Darlene was 'complete thought' within the form..not so easy to achieve in my experience thereof
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 10:08 AM
Hello Brian Strand, oh ---thank yu for explaining it tome. Enjoy your day my friend.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Nice tetractys Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 8:03 AM
Hello Cardn, this is my first try of this form. I will do more of them. thank you. Hugs.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 12:52 PM
A neat/fun write. It is good to try/learn something new. Clock and time will never stop. Have a blessed day...........................
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 8:04 AM
Hello Paula, My first time with this form. Yes the clock and time will never stop. Blessings. my friend.
Gentile Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 11:42 AM
I had not known this form Darlene! Well done! Happy Sunday xxoo
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Hello Mike Gentle, it is a new form i thought I would try it out. It can be done backwards to. Happy Sunday. xxxx-oooo.
Pathak Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 11:50 PM
Thanks for introducing me to Tetractys poems. The more you learn the more you know how much more remains to be learnt.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 11:20 AM
Hello Aniruddha, yes my friend that is true. This is the first time I have tried it. I will be doing more of this form. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your dqay my friend.
Rose  Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 4:17 PM
Yes, the clock is an essential part of our daily living, Darlene, gl in the contest, hope you win right on time :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 11:22 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, yes the clock is the essential part of our life. No I am not entering a contest. Enjoy y9ur day my friend.
Romios Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 7:48 AM
Trying a new form? Good for you, Darlene, Time and I are weird. I cringe on meeting schedules, any schedule. Glad I am retired..I live by my own schedule. I loathe clocks LOL PANGIE. XXOO
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 11:01 AM
Hello Panagiota, I am not a clock watcher. I can have breakfast at 10 o'clock. I do not have to eat right away when I awake. Hugs xx
Sands Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 12:06 PM
Quality of time. Great one Darlene :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 3:12 PM
Hello Heidi, yes quality of time. Thank you . Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 11:11 AM
- ... catch the time ... before it flies, Darlene :) - Great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 11:57 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile,Oh that woulb be nice. if I could. Hugs Darlene
Poet Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 7:08 PM
Time is so valuable, and it's the same as a sword. I enjoyed reading this poem
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 10:17 AM
HelloTayeb Lasaab, yes Tayeb time is valuable. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 2:53 PM
Yes, Darlene, time is valuable. Enjoyed your short and sweet poem. Love ~ Mala
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 3:17 PM
Hello Mala, I am glad that you did love & Friendship Darlene.
Cunningham Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Thankfully I'm now retired so no longer watch the clock, rarely look at it now. Hope your week is going well. Tom
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 3:18 PM
Hello tom, Hello tom yes so far my week is going well. Enjoyyour evening my friend.
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