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Cloak and Bragger

Cloak and Bragger/senryu the syllable count piled up on the vacant beach cloaked in mystery John G. Lawless 3/12/2015

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Date: 3/15/2015 3:24:00 PM
John, enjoyable imgery....SKAT
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Date: 3/14/2015 7:33:00 PM
speaking of penguins, you should read my older one Pierre.it's about a gay penguin! Interesting play on words with this one!!
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Date: 3/14/2015 12:40:00 PM
Dear John, you gave me a good laugh with your senryu. Since we all pronounce words differently, syllable counts are really a "mystery," as are rhyme and meter. Excellent write :D Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/12/2015 6:28:00 PM
ha! very funny...
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Date: 3/12/2015 5:30:00 PM
lol...very humorous...C--->A
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Date: 3/12/2015 5:22:00 PM
Chuckles: Great senryu! Haiku/Senryu Tanka/Choka just keep counting by 5s and 7s.
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Date: 3/12/2015 5:16:00 PM
Love your humour here John:-) Hugs jan xx
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