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Cloak and Bragger

Cloak and Bragger/senryu

the syllable count
piled up on the vacant beach
cloaked in mystery


John G. Lawless
3/12/2015

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Skat A

Date: 3/15/2015 3:24:00 PM

John, enjoyable imgery....SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2015 7:33:00 PM

speaking of penguins, you should read my older one Pierre.it's about a gay penguin! Interesting play on words with this one!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/14/2015 12:40:00 PM

Dear John, you gave me a good laugh with your senryu. Since we all pronounce words differently, syllable counts are really a "mystery," as are rhyme and meter. Excellent write :D Love, Carolyn