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Clipped Wings

Trapped within flutter
    Unable to fly soul birds
        Languish like dead fish

Date March 22. 2017
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Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/26/2017 2:03:00 AM

Sushma, there is no greater pain than to feel trapped, unable to fly. Lovely write. Thank you for your visit to my poem about my daughter.

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/27/2017 12:16:00 AM

Thanks, Eileen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2017 9:16:00 PM

Sadness well conveyed, Sushma.

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/27/2017 12:17:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea