Irfana Ali Bhat Poet Rhyme

Clipped Feathers

My feathers  clipped by ruthless time
               Me  in my prime
                   In a prison
              Of life’s treason

Some strength ,still  left inside my heart
               To freshly start
                  To get going
                   Again flying

My patience helped ,to grow new wings
              Those feathered  things
                A flight to dreams
                Now, easy seems!!

11/10/12
By- Irfana ali Bhat
Contest- Just A Minute!

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Tanya Harrington October 29, 2012 at 11:22 AM Wonderful write! Congrats on your win! :) Tanya

Carol Sunshine Brown October 29, 2012 at 6:17 AM Congratulations on your super placement in Nette's "Just A Minute" contest Irfana. Love, Carol

Cyndi Macmillan October 27, 2012 at 8:14 PM Oh, I think this is wonderful! Yes YES deserving of the top spot. Emotes truth with clarity yet is built on/with metaphor. Reminds me of Maya Angelou. Congrats on the win and thank you for sharing. Smiles from Cyndi

Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2012 at 9:35 AM wonderful and what a win for you. congratulations, Irfana. Irfana Ali Bhat October 27, 2012 at 12:50 PM Thanks Andrea...:))

Joann Grisetti October 27, 2012 at 9:09 AM A lovely poem on feathers. Congratulations on your win. Irfana Ali Bhat October 27, 2012 at 12:50 PM Thanks Joann...xx...:))

Gwendolen Song October 27, 2012 at 8:17 AM Congrats to u on an outstanding write!! Irfana Ali Bhat October 27, 2012 at 12:49 PM Thanks ....

Richard Lamoureux October 27, 2012 at 8:10 AM I can see why you won, this is very good and relevant. Well done. Irfana Ali Bhat October 27, 2012 at 12:49 PM Thanks...:)

Debbie Guzzi October 27, 2012 at 6:30 AM Wonderful content! and imagery Congrad's on your win. Light and Love Irfana Ali Bhat October 27, 2012 at 8:09 AM Thanks Debbie...:))

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl October 27, 2012 at 3:51 AM Big congratulations Irfana, well done xx Irfana Ali Bhat October 27, 2012 at 8:09 AM Thanks Mandy...:)

Tahera Mannan October 26, 2012 at 10:48 PM Many congrats Irfana for tis awesome win. Irfana Ali Bhat October 27, 2012 at 8:08 AM Thanks Tahera..:))

Poet Destroyer A October 26, 2012 at 9:30 PM Irfana, congratulations in Nette's "JUST A MINUTE!" contest.. wishing you well.. xox~PD Irfana Ali Bhat October 27, 2012 at 8:08 AM Thanks PD...xx..:)

Carrie Richards October 26, 2012 at 7:43 PM What a wonderful way you have chosen to use the theme of this contest. Well done, and hooray for your number 1 win!!! Irfana Ali Bhat October 27, 2012 at 8:08 AM thanks Carrie...:)