Clipped Crops and Croquet Mallets

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Pear Tree in Blossom By Van Gogh

I miss so many things: the old pear tree, which once lived by the walk and the bees inside. The bees almost never stung, but made the most delightful buzz. The smell of the pear blossoms and the fruit as it rotted on the ground. I even miss the colonies of ants, which swarmed. You see, I chopped it down. Well, the bees stung my ex-husband, or, he was scared of the bees, or some such thing. The bees like the cat, knew more about the true core of the man than I did. Once the cat shat on his side of the bed, and pulled the sheet over it. Even then, I didn’t really hear nature’s call. I miss the rose bushes, which I tore out because of the June bugs. “Mustn’t have untidy, ugly, things around me,” fool that I was, and continue to be. I have almost eradicated the wild violets. Soon, even I will be gone. “Who will remember all that sweetness? Oh, the pear crisp with crumbled cinnamon crust on a Fall day, all gone.”

a mown lawn
stretches to the horizon –
a hedge clipper whir

The Rose Queen was a lesser villain than I. She was imaginary and I am real, or so I believe. “If you’d lived with Alice would you have played croquet with a flamingo club?” 


First Published in Contemporary haibun January 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/13/2015 7:11:00 PM
This is an absolutely marvelous write; I enjoyed the imagery throughout the read... Mm, I can almost taste the pear crisp. I'm most tempted to make one; alas, I must allay the urge as I have a few pounds trying to make me round so I can only imagine playing croquet with Alice too burn off the pounds and perhaps have a taste of such a yummy dish. Thank you Debbie for sharing
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Date: 2/11/2015 3:42:00 PM
Your words gently take the reader to a private place in your heart and we feel welcome. A must wonderful feeling.. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/11/2015 2:08:00 PM
This is quite the story, Debs! LIke Jan, I love the part about the cat. Sounds like they slept with lots of animals like me and Joe. hahaha
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Date: 2/11/2015 8:26:00 AM
Hey Debbie, an absolutely wonderful poem filled with great imagery and funny too! How gently also have you instilled beautiful scenes of Nature. I love it and thanks for sharing it. Very well done. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 2/10/2015 4:38:00 PM
Beautifu - l I agree , crazy imagery - i love, the cat shat on the bed -brilliant , and along with the rose bushes you sure got rid of the 'untidy ugly thing' with an ex husband - hilarious - a 7 and into faves Debbie I truly marvel at the creativity in this write:-) Hugs jan xx
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