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Clinging Attraction

If i had but a fragment of time,to the top of your heart i would climb. Resting my love on your every breath. Ignited bond fires to keep a sublime soul warm,to save a trembling beauty from a snow storm. coiled in my arms you would be. A snake wrapped in a mink of my love, you'll see. insurmountable attraction sets a fire adorn. Beyond the golden gates of heaven,there you seemed to be born. Before your presents i was forlorn,but with your presents a new hope was born. A hope girdled with wool and glittered gold. If i had but a fragment of time,to the top of your heart i would climb. Resting my love on your every breath.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/10/2013 10:59:00 AM
Good morning, ELLIOTT;-) Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Have yourself a nice and sweet Sunday. ~Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 6/15/2012 8:44:00 PM
"If I had but a fragment of time, to the top of your heart i would climb" such a deep way of expressing yourself! Would you do what YOU enjoy for her or what SHE enjoys? Is there any compromise? <3
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Date: 4/13/2012 11:21:00 PM
Deep, emotional and very nice. TLee
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Date: 4/9/2012 11:50:00 AM
Sooo! Romantic...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet
Date: 4/9/2012 11:52:00 AM
thank you .glad you enjoyed.
Date: 4/9/2012 11:21:00 AM
I love the ending of this one.. So much hope in your lines ;)
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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet
Date: 4/9/2012 11:54:00 AM
thank you so much.

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