Clinging Attraction

If i had but a fragment of time,to the top of your heart i would climb.
Resting my love on your every breath.
Ignited bond fires to keep a sublime soul warm,to save a trembling beauty from a snow storm.
coiled in my arms you would be.
A snake wrapped in a mink of my love, you'll see. 
insurmountable attraction sets a fire adorn.
Beyond the golden gates of heaven,there you seemed to be born.
Before your presents i was forlorn,but with your presents a new hope was born.
A hope girdled with wool and glittered  gold.
If i had but a fragment of time,to the top of your heart i would climb.
Resting my love on your every breath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 10, 2013 at 10:59 AM
Good morning, ELLIOTT;-) Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Have yourself a nice and sweet Sunday. ~Always & Forever *LINDA
Britt Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 8:44 PM
"If I had but a fragment of time, to the top of your heart i would climb" such a deep way of expressing yourself! Would you do what YOU enjoy for her or what SHE enjoys? Is there any compromise? <3
Allen Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 11:21 PM
Deep, emotional and very nice. TLee
Kendrick Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 11:50 AM
Sooo! Romantic...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 11:52 AM
thank you .glad you enjoyed.
Neels Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 11:21 AM
I love the ending of this one.. So much hope in your lines ;)
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 11:54 AM
thank you so much.
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