Climbing Life

Thrusting against the wall erect from my youthful womb I alone must go from the tree that shelters the grave of her umbilicus, and the place of Ma Puddy’s tomb; the woman whose foretelling is come to pass in me. I went down, and up the fleeting crags garnering memoirs, yarns stilled in passing notions; that’s what was wished-for but I misplaced details while going downhill I took her beautiful eyes that laugh when crying my tears, the ones I no longer spill on satin and fine silk; they went when bottles brought fists to my face She was to flee, and by no means continue my days For her it is to reach and grasp opulence, and look at nuisance fleeting, the sudden that came with rapture evoking youthful musing she is called to make this climb. She came and spread like honeysuckle, arresting the sun and calling birds to feast. She took my shell, forfeiting me, and lives in novelty and wonder I found my youth in sparkling eyes that do thoughtful things (things done boldly). I cuddle me in the life I filched and lived her life a thousand times with my little girl.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/23/2011 11:49:00 AM
Wonderful write, I enjoyed. Thanks for sharing, bl
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Date: 7/26/2011 1:48:00 PM
Hope you are having a wonderful week Earle. I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2011 1:40:00 PM
nice rhetoric and metaphores....Good write....God bless...Old Jack
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