Gordon Mcconnell Poet Rhyme

Climb Me If You Can

Here I am so very high
being created by the creator
so very hard in my rock surface
such grandeur nothing greater

Majestic best describes me
being seen from miles around
my focus point covers very much
seldom is my pinnacle found

My eyes watch many failures
that mankind seeks to overcome
even death overtakes so many
shows them fallen totally numb

I am millions of years old
eternal sums up my name
having watched so much pass by
whatever happens, I'm never to blame

I'm mountain, that's my name
look on at my beauty so great
so colourful and snow-white often
at my peak very cold in winter state

(I have personalized nature in this piece, being a mountain and speaking from that great peak's perspective looking down on all the rest of nature and mankind. )

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Rebecca Streets November 7, 2021 at 1:20 PM Thanks for sharing your work Gordon! Gordon Mcconnell November 8, 2021 at 5:45 AM Thanks Rebecca for your kind words, take care, Gordon

Lindsay Laurie October 14, 2021 at 7:53 PM Hello Gordon ... nice impersonation of one mountains view of its time - thank you Gordon - Lindsay Gordon Mcconnell October 15, 2021 at 5:05 AM Thanks Lindsay, Glad you enjoyed this one, hope you're having a lovely day,Gordon

Darlene De Beaulieu October 12, 2021 at 11:24 AM Hello Gordon McConnell, I love it!! Will be my fav. Blessing my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu October 13, 2021 at 10:16 AM Hello Gordon, Your welcome. Blessings always to you . Gordon Mcconnell October 12, 2021 at 12:09 PM Thanks Darlene, Glad you loved this one and so encouraged you made it your fav. Blessings always,Gordon