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Climb Me If You Can

Here I am so very high being created by the creator so very hard in my rock surface such grandeur nothing greater Majestic best describes me being seen from miles around my focus point covers very much seldom is my pinnacle found My eyes watch many failures that mankind seeks to overcome even death overtakes so many shows them fallen totally numb I am millions of years old eternal sums up my name having watched so much pass by whatever happens, I'm never to blame I'm mountain, that's my name look on at my beauty so great so colourful and snow-white often at my peak very cold in winter state (I have personalized nature in this piece, being a mountain and speaking from that great peak's perspective looking down on all the rest of nature and mankind. )

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Date: 11/7/2021 1:20:00 PM
Thanks for sharing your work Gordon!
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 11/8/2021 5:45:00 AM
Thanks Rebecca for your kind words, take care, Gordon
Date: 10/14/2021 7:53:00 PM
Hello Gordon ... nice impersonation of one mountains view of its time - thank you Gordon - Lindsay
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/15/2021 5:05:00 AM
Thanks Lindsay, Glad you enjoyed this one, hope you're having a lovely day,Gordon
Date: 10/12/2021 11:24:00 AM
Hello Gordon McConnell, I love it!! Will be my fav. Blessing my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/13/2021 10:16:00 AM
Hello Gordon, Your welcome. Blessings always to you .
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/12/2021 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, Glad you loved this one and so encouraged you made it your fav. Blessings always,Gordon

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