Climate Change (Grand Daughter)

yesterday
the first leaves turned,
today
the ground is littered.

a summer without sun,
autumn in a two day ...

aah Beattie,
will your years
condemn
the memory of mine?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Sharpe Avatar
September 2, 2008 at 2:44 PM
thankyou all for commenting, for the encouragement. And especially thanks to Mark for opening up this contest to us Kevin
B Raju Avatar
August 27, 2008 at 3:44 AM
when i am older and hopefully wiser maybe i will be less demanding, but at 20 i want that steadfast eternal flame :) loved this poem of yours, especially the line 'will your years condemn the memory of mine?'. congrats!!
Richards Avatar
August 26, 2008 at 8:57 PM
Congratulations on your win! Your poetry makes magic of the words! Do keep writing for us!! Best Wishes..Carrie
Winter Avatar
August 26, 2008 at 5:32 AM
Congratulations Kevin on your Honorable Mention in Mark's contest. Wow. Awesome write. Love, Shar
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August 25, 2008 at 4:28 PM
Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem selected as a winner in Mark's contest. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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