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the old klunker was my friend
he lasted till the end

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i'd sit back feeling free
words would come to me
i'd have my glass of wine
a sip at every line
the images would soar
until they could no more

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AP: 3rd place 2025

Submitted on March 8, 2025 to contest ONLY MARCH 2025 POSTED sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  Honorable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 8:05 PM
Brings back the memories... How did we ever type on these monstrosities?
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 7:23 AM
it made our fingers stronger ~ lol
Kendrick Avatar
March 10, 2025 at 5:29 PM
So delighted to see your winning work on Brian's winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 7:24 AM
Much appreciated... thanks, Sara ~
Rodrigues Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 2:21 PM
Love this! Can picture you at the old klunker with your glass of wine :) Cheers, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 4:46 PM
Thanks for the lovely visit and comment, Kim ~
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