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comment on this
just leave your name
with thought on what you would have done to improve this
smiling hands of cigarettes
and singing bars
and then one by one later on go down the list
of those who left a remark
on this click
and welcome their efforts to belong to a group
and as you slide into their arms
as you go down the list
to comment on their works
of loves and struggles
and sentimental
and backwards logic
we'll ponder the joke without humor
of who and whats his name going where with the bases
so leave your comment
and tell me about the lights on at home
and if you turned off the stove
we'll dance in denials of sweet smiles wether we protested innocence or justice
to condemn which side pooping the majority
basking in the ignorance of minor priveledged details
place your name with a hello
please stop by
add your name with a uplifting
witty remark of something
and see yourself shine in time
join this click
and see those
come to you from going down the line as they slide
to drop you a line
So here's the first click
after you sign up
we'll discover our motto and games
our routines and voices
and go forth with a brigade of saving or condemning the human race
join our click
its cool
to be a joke
just leave a comment
and it will return to you
like a conversation with a mirror
now that we're coming clearer
welcome to the click
I'll so you around!
Copyright © Troy Nelson | Year Posted 2006
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