Click

Hi, there. I know I haven’t called for too long
   It’s not right, then again, it's not exactly wrong
 The time just flies by, and then ‘O, my’ 
   Midnight is not the hour to try…

 So, please accept this call at a.m., 5:45 
   With your insomnia, you’re surely up by five
 No, no, no. Please don’t hang up. There’s so much to say...
   Uh-huh… Well, can I just wish you (Click) ‘Good Day?’
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Krutsinger Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 12:47 PM
This is when I most want to call people " Midnight is not the hour to try…" sadly.
Flood Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 12:56 PM
Ha ha. There’s a five hour time difference between my brother in Florida and me in UK. There's been a few near misses on the five am phone call front.
Sands Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 8:02 AM
Lol. Click. ! :)
Wolf Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 8:03 PM
Click clack, I'm on track. Clack, click. Off track now; track's too slick. ~ Silly Me
Lawless Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 5:40 AM
The question is .... were you just getting in....or just getting up????
Wolf Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 7:59 PM
Good question, John. The answer: I was just getting up and in. ~ gw
Hankins Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 7:38 PM
Surely you didn't, gw. At 5:45 am, you say? Oh dear....
M  Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 7:09 PM
Cute as Big Bad! Debx
Hinshaw Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 4:26 PM
Your marvelous wit shines again, Gershon, with this one! Bob H
Forbes Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 4:20 PM
Definitely relatable! Felt it in the pit of my stomach...
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