Cleopatra Takeaway Egyptian Tears

Cleopatra's take-away 

At the top of our street

Is quite obviously a failing be enterprise

Which it sadly pains me to say

Because there never ever seems to 
be anybody inside apart from the 
actual owner himself

And it looks like he has ploughed everything
in life he has into it including his heart and soul

And it's certainly not down to his lack of
enthusiasm , dedication want or willing
to do anything in his power to make it work

Rather than see his dream in ruined in
tatters and taken away

Through no fault of his own but fall victim
to one of life's cruel circumstance and irony

Sometimes you do not get out what
you put in or get your just desert's

And the roller shutter's permanently come
down with a sign in the middle simply saying

                            Closed
         Open no longer for business
     Bank , Hope & Dream foreclosure

           Wrong Time - Wrong Place


**********************

Isn't life hard to get through enough
feling sorry for one's own woes

As well as then having to see and feel 
sorry for other poor souls as well
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 9/27/2021 11:17:00 PM
Hi Christopher. We are all at the mercy of things we can't control despite our best efforts. I like your empathy (not everyone has this) and your idea to base your free verse on a subject that is sadly very 'now''. Cheers - Gary
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 9/28/2021 11:56:00 AM
Cheers Gary Much obliged for your kind comments Appreciate it greatly Sir thank you ta
Date: 9/27/2021 9:24:00 AM
aww its a sign of the times Christopher:-( hugs Jan xx
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 9/27/2021 3:11:00 PM
Jan my friend Eternally glad to see you back amongst us all once again. Love hugs and blessings
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