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Clementine through the Clouds

clementine through the clouds a gentle shower of shine not blinding, but binding droplets of a restraining eye so like a passing surname a sign inhabits the Summer day hour upon hour of aimless thought of a most gracious heavenly soul she had peace as I struggled my mom dying from same ill clementine through the clouds melting like orange sherbert my eyes taste its pleasant hue my head in the cotton puffs, soothed

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/9/2024 11:40:00 AM

Kim, you speak of this with such kindness and love, that it tugs at my heart. I hope you are well, but also glad that you can share such creamsicle thoughts.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/9/2024 11:53:00 AM

Thank you, Duke! Doing well. Hope you are too.

Paige Hind

Date: 8/7/2024 11:03:00 AM

So like heaven, your writing.... wow, Kim...also, my condolences for your loss...<3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/7/2024 5:59:00 PM

Thank you, Paige. Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2024 3:15:00 AM

I'm sorry to learn of your loss. Has it been recently? It has been 26 years since daddy's passing and 24 years since mom's passing. I still miss them. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/7/2024 5:35:00 AM

It is a woman that I prayed with toward the beginning of her illness, shortly after my mom died from same illness. She will be laid to rest today.