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clementine honey

       clementine honey
the buzzing bees beholding
         a budding lily
     i’m adoring audible
crooning of colorful bloom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Beaufort Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 1:07 PM
Kim, great salute to natural pollination. There's a lot to enjoy going on if we only know where to look.
Hind Avatar
May 9, 2024 at 1:09 PM
Liked your tanka- very springtime
Pandit Avatar
May 9, 2024 at 5:04 AM
A beautiful poem Kim. ---audible crooning of colorful bloom--perfectly poetic, my friend.
Swan Avatar
May 9, 2024 at 4:44 AM
Yes. Love the surprise of hearing the bees, and love all the alliterative double bubbling. J :)
Andresen Avatar
May 9, 2024 at 3:55 AM
- A lovely tanka, Kim :) - hugs
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