Clear Water

Still pool, shaft of light,
sleeping eyes open..reflect.
Lips bow down to drink.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mohn Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 11:22 AM
Congratulations on this reflective gem Craig...thanks also for the comment on mine
Glenister Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 9:13 PM
Thanks David..and you are most welcome.
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 8:27 PM
OK, Now I got it. I just revisited your poem THAT and I understood!!
Glenister Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 9:07 PM
Don't know if that says a lot about my haiku..but thank you none the less. Much laughter :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 8:25 PM
Congrats on your win. I see you referring to a poem "that" and I need to refresh my memory as to what you are referring to. It's always good to follow your heart, poet!
Glenister Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 9:10 PM
Your a gem Andrea :)
Bordner Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 8:17 PM
This write elicits a thought of spiritual rejuvenation Craig. There is a beautiful humility and courage in the Vision. J.A.B.
Glenister Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 9:12 PM
Thank you Justin..much appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 11:53 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)
Glenister Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 7:42 PM
Thanks Anne :)
Mehta Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 1:30 AM
Dropping again to congratulate you, Craig
Glenister Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 4:04 AM
Thank you Dr Ram
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 6:21 AM
Lovely write with images, Craig
Glenister Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 6:23 AM
Thank you Dr,Ram
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