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Clear Thinking On a Cloudy Day

Memories like you dont always shine true. Nor do old places hold that magic. In a life so short. That seems so traggic. Im thinking of forever while slowley fading away. Oh such clear thinking on a cloudy day. A summer ago is when we met. So far now it seems. Yet the still my heart holds no regret. The poetry you inspired apon this very page. Is ment to complment a love without age. Early morning memories that you've lent. Is simpley a dream of time well spent. A dark sky hides the sunlights ray. Such is the clear thinking on such a cloudy day. Im not blind yet for years hope has went unseen. Sometimes age can taint a sweet dream. Turning bitter the once colorful fruit. Killing wonder straight at the root. A love like our's has kept with change. And grown in definance. Like a silly game. We formed this this passion swept Alliance. First with love you must blindly fall. Then you must try to run when you can bareley crawl. To outlast the storms is to stand against the wind. To ignor friends and to put trust in a stranger and depend. Many thoughts run through my head. In the early morning as she lay against me in bed. A heart has many rivers a soul is a endless sea. As we apart we are caged. While togather we are free. From this loves eternal bliss my heart should never stray. As i sit clear is my thinking on such a cloudy day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/28/2009 7:37:00 AM
This is lovely,i read Clive winslows poems, in which i find very much like yours!!!!!! love Simone
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Date: 10/15/2009 11:33:00 AM
This is a wonderful write honey. As usual. I geuss some people just dont have good taste. :) i love you keep writing.
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Date: 10/15/2009 6:00:00 AM
this is the sort of work that I find to beall to common on this site. Its safe and most of all I find it boring. Im sorry if that offends but you need someone to be honest with you. Stop wasting your time cause if this is all you can produce then maybe you should rethink your reason for being here.
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Date: 10/15/2009 3:55:00 AM
I especially like the next to last verse first line. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/14/2009 11:51:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today John. Thank you for sharing a piece of you with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2009 7:17:00 AM
Beautiful piece of poetry. I love it. Gidds
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