Clear Sailing

New thoughts flit in and out that deserve a kinder fate If they'd only meet resistance Perhaps they would gestate

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W.A. Cholt

Date: 11/3/2020 3:07:00 PM

Nice little gem. Reminds me of the creative process. How frustrating it can be when thoughts and words vanish in a moment of distraction. As Eliot said: Distracted from distraction by distraction.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/3/2020 4:48:00 PM

Distracted from distraction by distraction -- That's better than A rose is a rose is a rose! Thanks, ~ Two Lips

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/3/2020 6:15:00 AM

Clear sailing, bad helmsmanship? Nice one Gershon ;) Linda

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/3/2020 3:55:00 PM

Just gotta give the helmsman some Hellsman's (Mayonnaise). Then he'll guide the ship to a smooth, creamy ride. Oy, back to the drawing board tonight! :)

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 11/3/2020 5:44:00 AM

... Perfect....!!! You da man!!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/3/2020 3:51:00 PM

If I am 'da man,' then you are da woman!! lol. Thanks, Sigrid! Smiles for miles, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/3/2020 4:07:00 AM

I am ready for new thoughts. I said to my husband let's not have a president any more. That was thought up by slave owners who also thought up the abominable Electoral College. Let's abolish both and have a committee.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/3/2020 3:51:00 PM

How about a robot for President?! I've been in favor of that for a while. Feed it the data, and let it figure things out. Watch how quickly those who say they 'trust in science' would be SCREAMING BLOODY MURDER! lol. Anyway, here's to new thoughts. :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/2/2020 9:01:00 PM

Very interesting. I get the uneasy feeling that some of those thoughts I should've kept. :0

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/3/2020 3:48:00 PM

Well, you can always wait for the same thought or another to just 'flit in' again... Then you can 'fit it in, Evelyn!' Smiles, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/2/2020 6:52:00 PM

Flitting... great thought to ponder.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/3/2020 3:47:00 PM

That's my word for the week -- flit! Rhyme with sh**, but much fluffier! ~ Electioned-out (Not really. The whole circus didn't affect me one iota).