"clear Eyes"

A sun ray glides over
brightens my inner being
till my eyes are clear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 2:28 PM
A haze cascades as life goes on, nice one Michael >> James
Galua Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 5:08 AM
a meaningful imagery,,,^_^ v
Sweetheart Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 9:42 PM
The Sun is my best friend ..especially in the Summer with its hot rays.. great Haiku Michael.. luv your title too .. my White Knight strikes again.. with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 6:40 PM
How nice and cheeful. LUv, Andrea
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August 1, 2010 at 6:29 PM
enjoyed reading your work!! Well done!
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August 1, 2010 at 6:20 PM
Michael, about my poem it is to personal to post on the soup. I wrote it shortly after my mother passed and I feared the worst, but the poem really helped me see the light.. You are such a sweet and kind poet. I will just take this time to thank you for you for sharing your poetry with us during your famlies hard time of grieff. I know it would have destroyed me, to see my family members in pain. And than my self. Have a wonderful one,..LeeAnn
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August 1, 2010 at 6:14 PM
The sun has a way to reach deep inside. It can reach the inner soul while other can't seem to get thru.. Michael the warmth of your poem will reach your surface soon.,..LeeAnn
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August 1, 2010 at 5:24 PM
Michael, your haiku is lovely. Is there anything I can do to help you now? I saw your comment and want you to know I'll be home from vacation tomorrow night. Please feel free to reach out to me. I have unlimited long-distance in the US at my home phone. Let me know if you'd like to chat. Love, Carolyn
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