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"clear Eyes"

A sun ray glides over brightens my inner being till my eyes are clear.

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James Fraser

Date: 8/23/2010 2:28:00 PM

A haze cascades as life goes on, nice one Michael >> James

Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 8/13/2010 5:08:00 AM

a meaningful imagery,,,^_^ v

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/1/2010 9:42:00 PM

The Sun is my best friend ..especially in the Summer with its hot rays.. great Haiku Michael.. luv your title too .. my White Knight strikes again.. with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2010 6:40:00 PM

How nice and cheeful. LUv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/1/2010 6:29:00 PM

enjoyed reading your work!! Well done!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/1/2010 6:20:00 PM

Michael, about my poem it is to personal to post on the soup. I wrote it shortly after my mother passed and I feared the worst, but the poem really helped me see the light.. You are such a sweet and kind poet. I will just take this time to thank you for you for sharing your poetry with us during your famlies hard time of grieff. I know it would have destroyed me, to see my family members in pain. And than my self. Have a wonderful one,..LeeAnn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/1/2010 6:14:00 PM

The sun has a way to reach deep inside. It can reach the inner soul while other can't seem to get thru.. Michael the warmth of your poem will reach your surface soon.,..LeeAnn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/1/2010 5:24:00 PM

Michael, your haiku is lovely. Is there anything I can do to help you now? I saw your comment and want you to know I'll be home from vacation tomorrow night. Please feel free to reach out to me. I have unlimited long-distance in the US at my home phone. Let me know if you'd like to chat. Love, Carolyn