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Cleansing of Fragile Moments

I listen to whispers utterly abhorrent Of fragile moments now that you are gone Wake every empty morn with emotional Ambivalent feelings tracing the sea I am consumed with the mournful pain Of innumerable romantic dreams roll Of a dead body that vibrate obnoxious Frigid sardonic sun, unveil the sky. Wonder, hope, and fervent dreams, gone away Little by little even the soul cold deep Tension not to believe in all that goes away Only farewell within fear and darkness. Magnetic force shuddering Before the dawn as I carry on A flowering orchid colourful And fragrant a long stem beauty Passionate depth trickle slow and Steady emotions like drizzling rain And crackling thunder forever free A virtuous rewardable renewal 12/7/2020 Catharsis poetry Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 12/12/2020 6:30:00 AM
Congrats Eve on your win!!
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Date: 12/11/2020 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a write. I can feel your emotions. "Cleansing of Fragile Moments" can sometimes be easier said than done. Enjoy your win with blessings and a hug..............
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Date: 12/11/2020 2:57:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/10/2020 7:33:00 PM
Word magic! Beautiful! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/10/2020 9:23:00 AM
So profound and moving and lovely choice of words to describe emotions.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 12/7/2020 6:46:00 AM
So profound and whispers with melancholy that breathes life through the poem. A beautiful entry indeed. God bless you
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Date: 12/7/2020 6:33:00 AM
Entering the depths of one's soul is often necessary and cleansing the debris is more important. A wonderful poem. ~~
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Date: 12/7/2020 1:41:00 AM
We all need cleansing at times, soulful poetry, Eve:)
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