Cleansing of Fragile Moments

I listen to whispers utterly abhorrent
   Of fragile moments now that you are gone
      Wake every empty morn with emotional
         Ambivalent feelings tracing the sea 

I am consumed with the mournful pain 
   Of innumerable romantic dreams roll
      Of a dead body that vibrate obnoxious 
         Frigid sardonic sun, unveil the sky.

Wonder, hope, and fervent dreams, gone away
   Little by little even the soul cold deep
      Tension not to believe in all that goes away
         Only farewell within fear and darkness.

Magnetic force shuddering 
   Before the dawn as I carry on
      A flowering orchid colourful
         And fragrant a long stem beauty 

Passionate depth trickle slow and
   Steady emotions like drizzling rain
      And crackling thunder forever free
         A virtuous rewardable renewal


12/7/2020

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Koplin Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 6:30 AM
Congrats Eve on your win!!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a write. I can feel your emotions. "Cleansing of Fragile Moments" can sometimes be easier said than done. Enjoy your win with blessings and a hug..............
Andresen Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 2:57 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Seeker Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 7:33 PM
Word magic! Beautiful! Congrats on your win!
One Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 9:23 AM
So profound and moving and lovely choice of words to describe emotions.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Mcintosh Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 6:46 AM
So profound and whispers with melancholy that breathes life through the poem. A beautiful entry indeed. God bless you
Buhagiar Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 6:33 AM
Entering the depths of one's soul is often necessary and cleansing the debris is more important. A wonderful poem. ~~
Daniel Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 1:41 AM
We all need cleansing at times, soulful poetry, Eve:)
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