Clean

When the storm is out
And the rain has stopped 
Deluging my drought,
I find my weights dropped
I have been clean washed. 



2nd April 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 4:16 PM
shortest quintain I may have ever seen. So cute.
Ayantika Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 1:47 AM
Thank you! I wanted to write something simple and metaphorical. It's not easy being clean
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