Clean

When the storm is out
And the rain has stopped 
Deluging my drought,
I find my weights dropped
I have been clean washed. 



2nd April 2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 4/2/2023 4:16:00 PM
shortest quintain I may have ever seen. So cute.
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/3/2023 1:47:00 AM
Thank you! I wanted to write something simple and metaphorical. It's not easy being clean
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