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Clawed Branch


Discarded driftwood
clawed branch in desperation 
where once it stood tall




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Andrea Dietrich

June 25, 2014 at 3:59 PM

I think I never heard anyone say those two words together before. Clawed branch, a unique image!!

Sara Kendrick

June 11, 2014 at 5:01 PM

Descriptive work indeed..Driftwood has it own character doesn't it..Thanks for the visit to my page ..Your comment was uplifting..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

June 9, 2014 at 4:17 PM

James, it does not matter if it's your strongest form... Just as long as someone is enjoying them... :) Linda

Poet Destroyer A

June 24, 2014 at 9:13 PM

right back at ya

James Fraser

June 24, 2014 at 2:32 PM

;-) ty :)

Poet Destroyer A

June 9, 2014 at 9:19 AM

James,, well done on the haiku. Enjoyed the image. LINDA

James Fraser

June 9, 2014 at 2:08 PM

Thanks kindly Linda, although Haiku are not my strongest form, James :)

Jayne Eggins

June 9, 2014 at 8:13 AM

wow I loved it beautifully done...love Jayne xxx

James Fraser

June 9, 2014 at 2:36 PM

Thanks Jayne, as I mentioned above. Haiku is a form I need to do more of, James xx

Connie Marcum Wong

June 7, 2014 at 9:16 PM

I love how trees reveal their history from their beginnings recorded in their rings and in their twisted limbs and even in their leaves. You provide the majesty of the tree in this wonderful haiku James!

James Fraser

June 8, 2014 at 10:47 AM

Thank you kindly Connie :)