Claw Flaw

Claw Flaw small kitty cat had but one flaw he couldn’t count the missing claw so when his claw count totaled seven he thought he’d cheated “kitty heaven” when he thought he was just fine he learned he’d squandered number nine claw counting days now sadly done his feathered wings still missing one John G. Lawless 8/29/2014 For PD’s One Sad Poem contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2014 11:31:00 PM

Awwww, this is so cute, JOhn. a kitty claw poem. that is very clever. Thinking outside the box to depict death of a sweet pet. coincidentally my sad poem is called Dear Dying Cat, back in my oldies. I hope our cats make the winners' list!